Wednesday, December 15, 2010

Bhool si gai

Dalee ko chhod kar udi, mahtab ki chah me,
Kat chuke hai par mere, ye bhool hi gai,

Nigahen jamee hai kab se, ek lafz par,
Lafzon  ki pahechan mai bhool si gai,

Nami tairti ankhon me, us ki dekh kar.
Labon par thi hansi, ye bhool hi gai,

Dekha jo aqs us dilnashin ka,
Apni hi pahechan mai bhool si gai
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7 comments:

  1. swapnanjaliDecember 17, 2010 at 3:34 AM

    dear pehachan to aaj bhi hai...par ek naye najaria se...apni charon aur dekho kitne sare kushiyan hai...kitne sare achhe pal hain...jaane mat do inn sare lamho ko...jeeyo jeee bharake...hasso jeeee bhar ke...Smile always....

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  2. DRBharatsinhJanuary 1, 2011 at 5:48 AM

    nice one

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  3. Hema NimbekarFebruary 2, 2011 at 10:11 PM

    nice one...like it...

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  4. SimranFebruary 7, 2011 at 2:53 AM

    Beautiful composition!

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  5. AnonymousFebruary 13, 2011 at 3:35 PM

    HI! Nice blog. I am using a translator, so I hope the meaning doesn't get lost in translation.

    Thanks for stopping by my blog!

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  6. ShahinFebruary 19, 2011 at 7:03 PM

    Thanks a lot for sparing your time & comments...

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  7. Suresh ShresthaOctober 2, 2011 at 4:42 AM

    Really, Shahin, your words though difficult to catch properly have some charm and convey some touching senses. I followed only fifty per cent but felt it much more!

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